from The New York Review of Books

regarding Tom Jenks's editing of The Garden of Eden

Three weeks after Hemingway's death in 1961, his widow traveled to Cuba for his literary remains.... Charles Scribner Jr. has described her arrival in the office, carrying a large shopping bag bulging with unpublished material....  It was merely a matter of time and editorial ingenuity before the shopping bag was published.  With the exception of the cameo which a skillful editor named Tom Jenks shaped out of The Garden of Eden, we do not turn to these "posthumous works" for any of the pleasures of art.... Of The Garden of Eden we know, although not from Scribner's, that it existed as some 2,400 pages, out of which Tom Jenks created a comely and absorbing novel of 247 pages.  As we are told by a scholar who has examined the manuscript, it is "often more reiterative than cumulative, containing immense repetition that Hemingway seems to have been unable to control, and there is often little evidence among the variants that he privileged one text over another."  Seems to have been unable to control is a chilling phrase.

But Jenks has performed a dazzling feat.  The published text glows with language to bring to mind Hemingway at his best, tense with the excitement of narrative clarity yet hinting at mysteries just below the skin of the prose.

                                      — Thomas Flanagan (October 21, 1999)